Wednesday, January 6, 2010

Time Travelers Final Draft Reflection


For the Time Traveler's Project, I had to write a research paper on my civilization's pillar. I had Babylonia as my civilization, and Religion as my pillar. I went through several drafts to get to the final research paper that I have linked here.

The first draft of my paper was pretty good, but it could use some critique. It needed some things changed around, and some more detail in certain places, and less in others. When my second draft came along, I needed to add a bibliography and some footnotes. I did this, along with some new sentences and a new thesis statement. When this was done, my final draft popped out, which you can view via the link above. I can reflect on this project, with a nice Q&A, which you can see in the post above this, or click here.

Also, the picture on this post is a picture of the pillar that I painted that resembles the religion of Babylon.

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